I've seen the light! - Redux

Photography \ Figure | 12/31/05 @088 | zaecas | critiques (9) | views (350)

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This one was taken at my graduation party (not that I actually graduated, i'm still writing my.. monography -- how's that in english?-- about US international security policy in the Bush II admin), buuuuuuut, hulluva party.

The lighting on the dance floor was great, provided by some $400 per student, and I was drinking, dancing and kissing all that I could in one night.

Uh... did I mention that this is my ex?

Hope my girlfrienf don't rip my head off just because this is a nice pic.

edit: New crop , the guy in the backgroung is now a bit less distracting, just filling empty space, colors are the pic original.. almost boosted some levels to make her hair get out of the darkness.

The old one is linked bellow...

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Comments (9)

beatrizmatar

12/31/05 @111

Good photo¡¡¡¡I like it.

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UE-Skateman

12/31/05 @236

good shot, wish there was a little bit better focus

moserArtist

12/31/05 @323

It certainly looks warm in there...

The focus is unfortunitely a little off otherwise it could have been a really cool composition.

Good try though!

MeAndMyCam

12/31/05 @400

Interesting pose, nice colors

Diane

12/31/05 @483

Nice composition and colours, but it's a little bit too blurry.... It should be more blurry or less, but not as it is now. You should try to sharpen it or to blur it in PS

Well done though, nice pose!
+7

Passenger

12/31/05 @536

nice composition, cropped a bit tight, bit blurry. I like her ear piercing

keep experimenting!

zaecas

12/31/05 @685

new version... what do you think?
old one is in a link down below

First one:

Second atempt

As you can see i killed the dude on the right. sorry. A voice in my head told me to. Actually it was

Passenger, but nevermind that

Madanapale

01/02/06 @982

Nice capture of a nice moment!
Carlos

Colin

01/03/06 @784

I totally agree with your adjustments to the shot to remove the dude. It really helps with the focus of the shot. Nice work!

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